Oh my, this is very emotive. I really like the picture, however the medlion with mood and stars stand out a bit, it's not as polished as the rest of the artwork. But over all feeling about this piece: it's great!
Okay, I love the picture, but more importantly I adored the story it came from. I got to the last page and just kept clicking the continue button until I figured out like an idiot that there were no pages left. Worst moment of my life! Your story so far is really interesting, and its style is pretty cool as well. Some of the things that the assasin guy in the beginning said were one dimensional and cheesy. However, he's only there for like two seconds so it doesn't hurt the story really. *Takes out torches and pitchforks* I'd love to see more in the future.
Gorgeous... absolutely and totally gorgeous. There are no words for how lovely and detailed this is, but I'll try. You've made a fantastic surreal fantasy piece the likes of which I rarely find. I just have to repeat again how fantastically marvelous this is and say to you that this is a job very very well done!